Wednesday, June 12, 2013

SleepDry: Deceit by Perversion and Concealment.


SleepDry         http://www.sleepdryalarm.com/             http://www.sleepdry.com/        (June12, 2013)


SleepDry maintains two web sites. http://www.sleepdry.com/ appears to be a motivational site, with almost nothing relating to the SleepDry alarm itself. So we shall focus on http://www.sleepdryalarm.com/.

This site also stresses motivation. Information about the SleepDry alarm itself on this site is very limited in our opinion.
"Best Bedwetting Alarm for ages 5 thru teens."
"Quickest way to end bedwetting."
Why do some manufacturers feel obligated to say that their product is the "Best?" Or "Quickest?" Why or how can you or some authority prove that SleepDry is "Best," while the previously mentioned Nytone, Wet-Stop3 and Chummie are NOT the "Best?" Why is this evidence not presented? Why are all of you just making redundant noises about being "Best?" Is there some “phobia” or “complex” that causes all of you to make superlative “Best” product claims? But we forget that you are motivational experts, so claiming to be "Best" may be your way to motivate people to spend money on your device.

Do empty vessels make the most sound?

This is Deceit by Perversion of Truth.

Looking at your page on "See Why The Alarm Works," which seems to be the only page which actually discusses the SleepDry alarm, the information provided is sparse and incomplete.
*             We really don't understand how the alarm is attached to rest on the shoulder.
*             "The alarm sounds at the first sign of moisture." Might it be much more accurate to say "The alarm sounds when adequate moisture reaches the sensor and activates it?"
*             There is no description of the sensor and how it works. There is a simple illustration which shows a wire inside and another outside the briefs coming together on the briefs. This explains very little. The lack of an adequate description prevents readers from identifying how comfortable and easy-to-use this sensor might be.
*             "EASY SNAP-ON ATTACHMENT.  The small SLEEPDRY alarm snaps onto pajama tops or t-shirt, and the wetness sensor also snaps onto regular underpants."
How "small" is the SleepDry alarm? What does it weigh? How do these items "snap?" Could this be described much more completely so readers can truly understand your method and its attributes? Easy? Difficult? Does it fray clothes, as most mechanical snaps connecting through cloth frequently do? Etc. 

For a bedwetting alarm, using sound as its only alarm, we find the absence of loudness for the alarm to be disturbing. The reader should be interested in the loudness of the audio alarm at a typical distance from the ear where the alarm is usually placed. 

There are too many unanswered questions in our minds based on the sparse information about the SleepDry alarm provided on SleepDry's two web sites. The information provided is very inadequate and incomplete. This is Deceit by Concealment.

Between both sites, out of many pages, it appears as though one page (a small fraction of the total pages on the two sites) actually describes the SleepDry alarm. Almost everything else seems to be motivationally oriented.  If you cannot say much about (or are embarrassed talking about) the physical SleepDry alarm, perhaps you should honestly state that your purpose is to sell your motivational program. We come away from your sites wondering if it would not be more correct for you to call your program a motivational program, and perhaps the user could get another of the "BEST" alarms to actually use. Now they have TWO of the BEST, which may complement one-another and result in DOUBLE success!

We would recommend that the reader to go to a detailed comparative site such as http://urinealarms.com/Wireless_Alarm_Chart.html  and compare this alarm’s properties and price with those of other wired bedwetting alarms.


Deceit by Perversion and Concealment.

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